07 June 2007

Cherish every single wonderful times.

I love the quiet part of the place, where there are few people. Under a hospitable climate I feel peaceful and balance. Everything looks gently in my eyes. I love all the good times when I read my book silently. Life should be spending on wonderful times.
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Litmus Paper said...

Hi, you have not posted often enough for this period, 5/7 to 6/10.
I'm surprised that you emphasized "every single" (singular) but still used "times" which is plural here. Use "spent" in the last sentence (PP).
Use an adjective for the last word of sentence 2.
In general, be more careful. Proofread your writing before you post.

July 6, 2007 at 2:52 a.m.

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