After finished senior high school, I have already seldom gone out with friends.
We are still caring each other very much, but we have the others affairs have to get by. Later on, we look aloof. Then what can we do? If our arms were not reach out that pulls us through at the right moment. If our words could not bridge the doubt cause we have strange roads with different signs. We got little help from each others.
Little by little we walk away in quiet from one another life. Will we accept these silently? Will we accept these silently?
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It isn't clear what "these" means in the last (repeated) sentence. "each others" doesn't mean anything. "were not reach" has two verbs.
Just be more careful and read more often during the summer. Get your writing to improve through practice. You only have 9 entries but needed twelve for this period, 25% short.
73 for this period
Chris
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