07 April 2007

In the days to come...

I haven’t gone home for a month. So can go home for this holiday of four days I feel so excited. I have many thoughts in my head and ready to do, I was filled with happiness.
Essentially, nothing could simple to master. To give an example: I cannot handle some of my course work; I don't even have any idea how to begin working on it. I have some sort of psychological problem.
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Litmus Paper said...

Hi, it's Chris. To start with, your blog title is just a fragment, without a subject. It appears to me that what you need is not more patience, but more practice. If you read more often, you would be able to catch most of these errors automatically because they just don't sound right. Like this:
The 1st sentence here is a run on, with a comma splice. Thought is singular, but many indicates plural. "wait me" doesn't mean anything; that sentence is also a run on.
"not everything" would work better as simply "nothing." The 2nd paragraph's 2nd sentence is another run-on. Try it this way: "I cannot handle some of my course work; I don't even have any idea how to begin working on it. I have some sort of psychological problem."
Your blog should have at LEAST 18 posts by now, but I only see 12 (I don't count 2 nearly identical posts on "four days" as two different posts. I take off 33% for six missing posts; let's say a 54 for this time. Please start to READ daily and write daily too. Read over what you've written and compare it to your reading experience. Read your writing out loud and see if it sounds right.
Last, what does "four days" have to do with this post??
Keep at it, Nicole.
Chris O'Brien

April 8, 2007 at 6:19 a.m.
Litmus Paper said...

Nicole, I understand the "4 days" reference after rereading your post. Sorry for the brain freeze.
Chris

April 8, 2007 at 6:21 a.m.

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